Kaadhal redux

Thanimai avanukku pudhidhalla.
Mun avan kootathilum thanimai kandaan.
Indro thaniyilum unthunaiyil kulirkondaan.

Naalai kandavanai nee kanavanaakinaal,
kanavukottaigalin idipadugalil sikki
kaadhalaasiriyaiku oru nanri solli
thanimaiyain thunai naaduvaan.

Avalai andru ariyaamalirukkaiyil thondriyathu thanimaiya,
avalai indru marakkamudiyaamal thavippathu thanimaiya?